In a community filled with sameness and equality, grief and disasters often enter with caution. This is the main reason behind the structure and design of our community. Our community is a socialist community where everything from goods to services is shared equally among the population. No person is financially or socially inferior or superior to their fellow citizens.
This idea of equal share is reflected through the farmland in which every family has their own share. The land is divided equally among these families and as a community these families are responsible for deciding who plants and grows what. Also, each of these families has their own orchard next to their houses.
Our community is a mixture of an agricultural and industrial economy. We think that in combining two different economies, our community would be at a huge financial advantage. Along with the farmlands, we have factories and mills that are run by the members of the community. To get rid of the pollution and noise created by these factories, we have planted huge trees along the bank of Freedom River.
Our community will be open to the rest of the world. Trade and tourism is greatly appreciated and encouraged. However, this community is not an urban community. It is rural in nature in that it is small and not very densely populated.
As mentioned before, in our community everyone is equal. Therefore, slavery is out of question. No one is allowed to keep, sell or buy slaves. If they do so, they will be asked to leave the community and all their possessions would be taken from them.
The Community of Equals is not a community where everyone has to share the same beliefs. All citizens have a religious freedom. They can believe in what they want and they can practice how they want. Each religion is given the choice of buying a piece of land for a low price and building their religious house. The government is not involved in any activity of our community including the religious beliefs. How much the members allow for government involvement is decided through a vote by the members of the community.
We also have public service buildings including family and domestic counseling which provide support for families that are going through a family crisis. By the passage of time, the role of men and women and their relations change. Therefore, we want to make sure that we have services that can help people incase any problems rise.
Parity and equality is the backbone of our community. Through this we hope to have a community that is safe from the evils that greed and jealousy create. And we hope that everyone lives happily ever after…
Your group did a fine job on this blog. You stated clearly the fact that you wanted a community based on equality. You paragrapghs are good. I can see through your photo of your community that everything is nicely and evenly distributed throughout your community. So nicely done on that. Just a few errors to point out. 1) You need to underline or bold your thesis so then the reader knows what your thesis is and what your trying to prove. Lucky for you in your case the reader understands your trying to point out the virtues of equality. 2)Your first sentence of your paragraph is a little rough. So i think that you can fix that up a bit. Example: "In a community filled with sameness and equality, grief and disasters often enter with caution." Maybe you can change that to In a community that is filled with sameness, equality, grief and disatsers, people often enter with caution. and 3) You have a lot of run-on sentences that can be easily fixed--for example: "We also have public service buildings including family and domestic counseling which provide support for families that are going through a family crisis." That can be changed to something like: "We also have public service buildings that include family and domestic counseling. They provide support for families in need and in a crisis. " Another point i wanted to make is that if your community is based on equality wouldnt your religion be the same so that everyone is on the same level on religion as everyone else. Also the part about: "By the passage of time, the role of men and women and their relations change" --why would it change if the roles are equal.... Other than that you guys did a superb job...~!
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