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In your photo essay there were a few problems that need addressing. First, there were no captions citing where the photos came from which is a copyright infringement which is somewhat important. Also, the captions which explained the pictures were very short and needed to be beefed up a little since they didn't do much more than explain what was in the picture. Also there were a few usage and grammar errors to speak of. You made this essay sound like you were speaking this and it gave it a very informal feel to it. There were also a few small spelling errors but nothing overly obvious. The pictures, however, were excellent and if they were explained with a little more detail, it would have made it a much stronger entry.
Posted by: Andy | November 09, 2004 at 10:35 PM